Who wants to read about Lake Balkhash?

by michaelhancock on 3/2/2009 · 11 comments

After the jump you’ll find the entirety of my Balkhash paper, as presented at the 16th Annual Central Eurasian Studies Conference in Bloomington, Indiana at Indiana University. It was my first conference, but I doubt it will be my last. The next paper I’m working on is also post-Soviet flavored, though probably of less interest to the general readership of this blog. That one will focus on a comparison between the various Newly Independent States that have Latinized their alphabets, perhaps including those that keep pussy-footing around the topic (Kazakhstan, I’m looking at you.)

  • Introduction
  • Map of Central Asian water
    Lake Balkhash lies in Central Asia, and is the largest body of water after the Caspian Sea, recently earning this status with the demise of the Aral Sea. Both the Aral and Balkhash lie locked in desert and semi-desert regions with little rainfall, fed largely by rivers running through heavily irrigated, arid regions. They are bodies of water with historically dynamic shorelines, vulnerable to a wide variety of actors in the region. comparative surface areas of central asian bodies of waterThe similarity of Balkhash and Aral suggests that a closer analysis of the cautionary tale presented by the disappearance of the Aral can give some indications as to the future of Balkhash. Being prey to many of the same factors that caused the desiccation of the Aral Sea, Lake Balkhash may soon suffer a similar fate. The permanent representative of the United Nations Development Program in Kazakhstan stated “…Lake Balkhash could meet a fate similar to the Aral Sea.” Though Balkhash exists largely in anonymity, it was not until its fishing fleets lay rusting in the desert that the Aral Sea came to worldwide fame and notoriety. This paper presents, in two parts, an analysis of the demise of the Aral Sea, listing those factors in common with Lake Balkhash, as well as those distinctive of each. The analysis of the Aral Sea’s demise in this paper will include only up to the fall of the Soviet Union. One factor is the social planning from which both Balkhash and Aral have suffered. The disastrously wasteful consequences from dam mismanagement and the civil engineering failed to consider natural requirements when figuring economic, industrial, and agricultural progress. Another factor is the impact of global environmental issues on the region, especially concerning the phenomenon of global warming. One more complicating factor is a system of inefficient irrigation practices servicing the demands of thirsty crops and urban development away from aquifers, and the pollution of rivers and groundwater with industrial waste and agricultural runoff. Following the analysis of the Aral Sea, this paper will illuminate those self-same factors that could lead to Lake Balkhash’s own disaster.
    The many issues at work in the death of the Aral Sea are not all present in Lake Balkhash’s situation, and some are unique to the Aral Sea, as others are unique to Lake Balkhash. Moreover, some factors are quite intertwined, while a few are unaffected by the severity of others. The reasons for the disappearance of the Aral are still debatable, and this paper utilizes opinions of experts to compare the situation with Kazakhstan’s Lake Balkhash. Tragically, the government of Central Asia did not understand the importance of the Aral Sea until it began to disappear. During the Soviet Union, most civilians could not imagine the disappearance of the Aral Sea even as various party officials and policy makers included its eventual disappearance in their plans.

  • Aral Sea: An Overview
  • The name of the Aral Sea, which means “island,” is significant because the historic levels of the sea created thousands of small islands , hundreds larger than an acre in size. Others suggest that the island the name refers to is the water itself , an island of water in a sea of sand, surrounded as it is by the Kara Kum and Kyzyl Kum, two of the largest deserts in Central Asia.
    The Aral Sea was once the fourth largest lake in the world, though its levels have changed dramatically over the millennia. It was roughly four times the size of Lake Balkhash in 1960. When geographers and historians refer to ‘historic levels’ with regard to the Aral Sea, they refer to the level of the sea in the early 1960s . During the first half of the twentieth century, the sea supported a thriving fishing industry, marsh and forest ecosystems. Compared with those levels, the desiccation has indeed been catastrophic.
    Many factors have played a part in the Aral Sea catastrophe. Perhaps the most well known is cotton, as many journalists and scholars have lamented that the loss of the Aral was the price the Soviet Union agreed to pay to grow cotton in the deserts of Central Asia. In addition to the cultivation of thirsty crops like cotton and rice, the system of irrigation canals itself was a part of the problem. Woefully wasteful unlined ditches and canals lose much of their water to seepage and evaporation. In order to irrigate more land and provide electricity to growing communities, the Soviet Union built several dams in the area. These dams also played a part in the tragedy, creating several accidental brackish lakes in the desert, in essence stealing water from the Aral to dry up in the desert. The bureaucratic policies of the Soviet Union in turn affected these factors. Scholars have long lamented that the Soviet Union saw nature as expendable in the pursuit of progress, and the Aral Sea’s disappearance was just one part of the Soviet Union’s plan for the future of Central Asia.

  • Cotton, Irrigation, and Dam Mismanagement in the Aral Basin
  • Soviet farming practices in Central Asia were very different from Traditional methods of farming, to the detriment of local agriculture. Soviet farmers cultivated large, unbroken tracts of land converted from desert into arable land using large irrigation canals. Prior to Soviet power, sedentary Central Asian populations raised mostly food crops, on much smaller, labor-intensive small-plot farms with windbreak tree lines and individually maintained irrigation ditches. The irrigation system put in place during the twentieth century by the Soviet Union was unlined and wasteful, in contrast with tradition. Ancient irrigation systems unearthed by archaeologists were more efficient and effective than the local, modern irrigation and “investigations at Merv in southern Turkmenistan… indicate no evidence of soil salinization within the oasis despite many hundreds of years of irrigation. However, Soviet-built irrigation schemes resulted in widespread salinization and water-logging within 20 years of their introduction.” Advanced irrigation existed in ancient times, and “…the first descriptions of water management in Central Asia are provided in the works of the Arabic historians and geographers of the 9th–13th century… Their writings give very detailed accounts of water distribution and irrigation systems and it is evident that the administration of scarce water resources was central to the way in which the social and political hierarchy of settlements operated.”
    Central Asians were growing irrigated cotton prior to the Russian Conquest in the 19th century, but the Tsar, and the loss of cotton imports from the American South due to the American Civil War, influenced an exponentially increased cotton production in Central Asia. Whether called Transoxiana or Ma wara’un-Nahr , historians have long defined the watershed of the Aral Sea by the rivers that cross it – the Amu Darya and Syr Darya. Following the fall of the Russian Empire, the Soviet Union increased cotton cultivation, pushing water exploitation past the point of the ecological status quo and, beginning in the 1960s, the level of the Aral Sea began slowly to sink. Less and less water reached the sea, diverted to irrigation devoted to cotton, rice, and other thirsty crops, and the water that did arrive was laden with pollutants. . The Aral Sea had already begun to flee its shores when the fall of the Soviet Union transformed the issue from an internal economic issue into an international environmental catastrophe.
    The Aral Sea is like a barometer, acting as the indicator of the health of the rivers that feed it . As such, it is the overall management of waters in the Aral Sea basin that has caused the grand scale of devastation, and not simply cotton growers in Karakalpakstan bordering the sea. However, the architects of this catastrophe have not significantly altered their water schemes away from cotton-based economies or the other causes of the depletion of the Aral Sea. Though the governments of Kazakhstan and Uzbekistan have begun to replace some acreage with less thirsty, non-“cash” crops, the old habits of Soviet agriculture persist. The Aral Sea was once a source of vast wetland and forest habitats, a habitat, a source of food, a homeland to the Karakalpak. However, that disappeared in part in the pursuit of ‘white gold,’ the cotton that helped clothe the people of the Soviet Union, and “the fish basket of Central Asia became the waste basket of the region, as a large proportion of the salts and agricultural chemicals upstream were deposited in the area.”
    The adverse consequences of social-communist planning exacerbated the situation, if not being the cause of disaster outright. Two principal elements illustrate this point: first, the building of dams for development and second, the continued spread of cotton cultivation. With dams, as with many forms of artificial developments to manipulate natural resources, the Soviet Union did not employ a cost-benefit analysis. Often, different departments of the Soviet bureaucracy were competing for benefits and recognition, building unnecessary dams to utilize a seemingly endless supply of water. For example, the unplanned Lake Aydarkul, which shifts from three to four thousand square kilometers, is large enough to be easily visible in satellite photography. Caused by poorly managed dams on the Syr Darya at the border of the Kazakh SSR and the Uzbek SSR, Aydarkul has been, since its birth in 1969 , a mixed blessing at best. Thanks to unscheduled hydroelectric flows, these brackish, shallow, and temporary waters sink into the desert, restored each winter, and growing with increased hydroelectric activity in independent Kyrgyzstan. Soviet mismanagement created a similar situation on the border of the Turkmen SSR and the Uzbek SSR with the waters of the Amu Darya filling Lake Sarykamysh. Sarykamysh is a drainage collector of salty irrigation runoff, and currently covers more than three thousand square kilometers. Like Aydarkul, dams stop water traditionally headed for the Aral Sea, which instead drains into Sarykamysh. Aydarkul and Sarykamysh lie in salt flats far from cultivated lands, and the water trapped there is lost to economic use, unable to reach its original destination, an enormous waste.

  • Aral Sea: Political Considerations
  • The former Soviet Union never based its water management scheme on maintaining equal trade of resources between the republics, and Moscow dictated all terms. For example, the central location of decision-making meant that while Kyrgyzstan and Tajikistan let flow away their primary valuable resource, GosPlan in Moscow compensated them with subsidized fossil fuels, along with the benefits of the socialist system. The Soviet Union allowed the rampant disregard for natural cost that caused the catastrophe, but perhaps it was the fall of the Union in 1991 and the rise of border checkpoints that pounded the final nail in the coffin for the Aral Sea. Inter-regional inequalities and failed and unrepentant Soviet-style governance dashed any hope of unified efforts to conserve and restore the sea.

  • Lake Balkhash: An Overview
  • Surface Area Chart
    Lake Balkhash is of a different type than the Aral Sea, and its name reflects that stark contrast. Its name in Kazakh [Балқаш (Balqash)] derives from the word for “muddy.” Lake Balkhash’s water levels are historically very elastic, rising and lowering more than a meter from decade to decade. Unlike the Aral Sea, Balkhash has historically been very shallow, fed by minor rivers from the Dzungaria Plateau of Northwestern China and the Semireche region of southeastern Kazakhstan. Exact measurements of Balkhash’s current surface area range from 16,000 km2 to 18,200 km2. Balkhash has recently become the largest single body of water in Central Asia after the Caspian Sea . Lake Balkhash has an average depth of only 5.8 meters, and a maximum depth of 25.6 meters. Its eastern and western halves are quite different – the eastern being deeper and saline. Balkhash is located entirely inside one country, the Republic of Kazakhstan. However, the Balkhash watershed includes the Ili River, which rises in China’s Xinjiang Autonomous Region. Fifteen percent of the basin’s area lies inside China, including the glacial river sources of Balkhash .
    Various organizations are warning that that is exactly what could happen if current policies and plans continue. If Balkhash disappears, it will be the result of a line of naturally destructive developments begun in the Soviet Union and continuing in the present day in northwest China.
    The Ili River, rising in China, provides between seventy-five and eighty percent of fresh water inflow annually. Because the lake is shallow, more of its volume is susceptible to evaporation. Together with the smaller size and shallower depth, this makes Balkhash vulnerable to environmental change. Balkhash was roughly half-fresh water and half-saline in the 1960s, but the saline boundary has shifted south in recent history, the salinity increased due to artificial causes. The building of the Kapchagay dam and reservoir retarded the inflow of the Ili River, allowing the advance of northern brackish waters far enough south to affect the large industrial city of Balkhash, located halfway up the Western shore.
    Lake Balkhash is in danger for a variety of reasons. Similar to the Aral Sea situation, some of these factors are agricultural. Rivers flowing to Balkhash feed an inefficient irrigation system watering cotton and rice cultivation. In addition, dam building during the Soviet Union has played a part in desiccation of the area. However, unlike Aral during the Soviet era, Lake Balkhash is dependent on state-to-state cooperation, as a majority of the water in Balkhash comes from the Ili River and China. In addition to the Soviet legacy of development, similarly exploitive social planning exists in northwestern China. Finally yet importantly is the threat of global warming, which threatens Lake Balkhash. Independent of Chinese development, the disappearance of the glaciers of the Tien Shan and Central Asian mountain ranges would drastically change water reality for millions of people.

  • Irrigation, Dams, and Balkhash
  • Kapchagay reservoir is a symbol of progress and recreation for Kazakhstanis living in Almaty. The Soviet Union made initial development plans for the reservoir in the early 1960s . The new dam, according to GosPlan, would make it possible to irrigate an additional million acres, more than half of which would be devoted to rice. Fish bred behind the Kapchagay Dam would increase productivity, and water transportation would lower shipping costs – it seemed a win-win situation to GosPlan in Moscow. The dam would soon pay for itself.
    Over the course of its construction, lake levels dropped significantly. Two small lakes to the southeast of Balkhash completely disappeared, along with valuable wildlife habitat. Water logging and salinization continue to be major issues connected with Kapchagay, thanks in part to the level of irrigation necessary for rice cultivation.
    Kazakh SSR scholars began to protest the building of the dam because, due to its shallow depth, arid location, and rapid evaporation, the eastern end of the lake was susceptible to the environmental stress the dam would have caused. In the 1960s, residents of Balkhash, the industrial city on the center of the western shore, “began to realize that the flow of the Ili would be seriously disrupted when it was blocked to fill the Kapchagay reservoir. The diversion would mean a reduced flow of fresh water into the lake. This, in turn, would lead to an increase in the lake’s salt content and the poisoning of the town’s fresh water supply.” Protests led to the discovery that the Ministry of Power independently devised the Kapchagay Dam, and GosPlan in Kazakhstan had officially questioned the act as early as November 1964, six months before Moscow received the plans. The Ministry of Power had drastically overestimated agricultural returns while acknowledging that the dam would halt the spring floods that hydrated the delta area. Without those floods, the land reverted to desert in only two years. The Ministry of Power consequently emphasized the benefits of added electrical capacity and the creation of a recreational area close to the capital of Alma-Ata [present-day Almaty]. “Neither the recreational value nor the power potential was even mentioned in the 1965 plan. Furthermore, once construction had been approved, another calculation was made and it was discovered that it would take four, not 1.5 years for the dam to pay for itself.” The Ministry of Power secretly raised the proposed height of the dam. The reservoir filled ahead of schedule, the salinity of the water near Balkhash rose 8% in just the first year, and the level of the lake slowly descended.

  • Lake Balkhash: Political Considerations
  • Unlike the Aral Sea, Lake Balkhash’s political factors connecting Kazakhstan with its powerful neighbor China complicate the issues of water management, dams, and irrigation. Aside from the Soviet legacy, China is building even more dams along the rivers feeding Lake Balkhash. China’s oil industry is booming, and the oil industry is particularly thirsty, and located entirely in the upper reaches of the Ili River basin. The oil boomtowns, supplied with water that traditionally flowed to Lake Balkhash, grow every year. Ironically, thanks to increased glacial melt caused by global warming, Lake Balkhash has not shown any losses in the last several years, and even minor gains. This has lulled many into a false sense of Balkhash’s environmental security and safe future. Its safety and security are certainly in question, as one official claimed that the government’s goal is to retain three times the water drawn in 2007 from the Ili. Such an amount would seriously affect the levels in Kapchagay Reservoir. The impact of such an event is difficult to predict, as Kapchagay is the source of water and electricity for Almaty, Kazakhstan’s largest city.
    One issue is the decreased water available when upstream developments call for more water, impinging on downstream consumers. China is putting more land under irrigation every year. Both Kazakhstan and China view water as “God’s gift,” making it vulnerable to a ‘first come, first serve’ style of management. Kazakhstan may find itself asking China for ‘Chinese’ water to preserve Lake Balkhash. Stalemate continues as the Kazakhstan government strive to maintain the status quo . Pricing the water may yet offer a solution, though one with its own set of problems. “In spite of its vital importance to agriculture, water in the Central Asian region has largely remained unpriced, or has been priced at a purely symbolic level.” However, to maintain the current status quo between China and Kazakhstan, the loser will be the level of Lake Balkhash. The Regional Environmental Centre for Central Asia (CAREC), a Kazakhstani NGO, produced a draft agreement between Kyrgyzstan, Kazakhstan, and China regarding water resource sharing in 2007 , but without the political connections to bring the parties to the table.
    Even as Nazarbaev hopes to make Kazakhstan one of the top 50 most powerful countries in the world, China has the more attainable goal of being number one. Kazakhstan recently built an oil pipeline to export at market prices . “The current economy is developing under conditions of increasing water deficiency. In spite of increasing efforts by the governments of the countries in the region, and by the international community, the situation in regard to water supply and economic objectives in the countries of Central Asia remains tense and shows clear tendencies towards aggravation and conflict.” However, this gives Kazakhstan little political capital, as it needs Chinese oil imports more than China needs Kazakhstani oil. A frank look at the statistics drives the inequality home, with Kazakhstan’s entire population able to fit into a single large Chinese city. In short, China’s population and economic pressures are serious issues for Kazakhstan. Raising the water issue with the River Ili and Lake Balkhash would increase tensions with China’s plans in the Xinjiang Autonomous Uighur Region, earmarked for rapid industrial and agricultural development over the upcoming decades.

  • Local Consequences of Global Warming Trends
  • Recent years have seen a record amount of water race down the Ili from snowmelt and glaciers in China, masking the increase in water use. Glaciers are retreating and the continental climate is becoming extreme in Central Asia. Along with the Alps, Central Asia has seen some of the most drastic glacial disappearance anywhere in the world. The future of Lake Balkhash, not to mention the millions that depend on water destined for that body of water, depends in large part on those glaciers. While this has led in some cases to record highs in local reservoirs and incremental increases in Lake Balkhash, it speaks of a problem several orders of magnitude more severe than mismanagement or water rights disputes. While precipitation and groundwater feed some of the Balkhash basin, glacial waters and snowmelt are a large percentage that, if removed, would bring unforgiving ecological and economic consequences.
    The desiccation of Lake Balkhash would initiate an environmental downward spiral. “This would lead to longer, hotter summers with increased crop water needs and heightened irrigation requirements, which could in turn reduce aggregate water savings from irrigation improvements.” A drying Balkhash would expose thousands of square miles of sand and salt, to say nothing of the industrial waste from the city of Balkhash, to winds that would carry them into the remaining glaciers of the Tien Shan, accelerating the melting process.
    The disappearance of Balkhash would have wide-ranging effects, including on the local population . However, the concerned countries’ economic policymakers see Lake Balkhash as a holder of idle resources. The Soviet Union generally did not include the ‘idle’ natural uses of water resources in its analysis , and China is likely to repeat the mistake of not allocating water to natural reserves alongside agricultural, industrial, and personal use. The fact is that large bodies of water lower air temperatures, store winter warmth and normalize the extremes of the continental climate of the Asian steppe. Since the disappearance of the Aral Sea, winters have been colder and longer, summers hotter and drier, and dust storms far more frequent.

  • Conclusion
  • Kazakhstan without water
    In conclusion, the Aral Sea is mourned as an ecological disaster, and even more so as one wholly preventable and caused by chronic mismanagement, unashamed exploitation of nature, and exacerbated by an inefficient economic system. The Balkhash issue is one that can draw many comparisons with the Aral Sea, and many of the same factors are at work. This paper has covered some of them: the consequences of environmentally unsound social planning, the increasing seriousness of global warming, and the repercussions of faulty irrigation. Some other issues are unique to Lake Balkhash, like the international nature of the watershed, the development of oil in China and heavy industry on the shore of Lake Balkhash. The lost sea has a lot to teach the world about the upcoming crisis with Lake Balkhash. The health issues raised by Aral should be enough to give Kazakhstan pause. Increased cultivation of rice and cotton in the Ili River basin seems too obvious a form of déjà vu, especially when combined with a devil-may-care attitude towards the pollutants dumped into Lake Balkhash by the industries in the city of Balkhash. Lake Balkhash, which is disappearing when Central Asian governments should have learned their lessons already, is an issue for serious consideration in China and Kazakhstan.


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{ 11 comments }

1 Richard Wonder 3/3/2009 at 1:17 am

Thank you for this article. While I’m not involved in resource management in Central Asia I watch events developing there since I spent some time in Almaty in 2003, visited Kapchagay and the Ili River, and have since been curious about Lake Balkash.
I’m also looking forward to your article on the Central Asian countries with Latinized alphabets.

2 Kristine 3/4/2009 at 8:27 pm

It was good seeing your presentation at the conference. I did the Internet Libel Law in Tajikistan presentation – I was actually going to mention your article about the Prime Minister of Kazakhstan’s blog, but 15 minutes went by way too quickly.

3 Oldschool Boy 3/5/2009 at 2:25 am

Michael,
To figure out whether your paper is good or not you only need one thing: try to honestly answer to yourself the following 4 questions:
1) Does your work have new information that is going to be useful for concerned people: policy makers, researchers, managers? Keep in mind that these people have already read and written hundreds of articles and books on this topic and have likely been there and seen that
2) In your work do you use any new authentic data that your collected by yourself, that can not be found in any other paper or book?
3) In your work did you conduct any scientific analysis, quantitative or qualitative? Just comparison does not count.
4) Does your article stir any debate?

In other words if I grew up in the region, have a degree in hydrology or environmental science and know about the problem because it has been in newspapers and magazines and school courses, will it still be worthwhile for me to read your paper or listen to your presentation?
If you can answer honestly and positively to at least one of the above 4 questions, then you can pat yourself on the shoulder. Otherwise it will be just another school-paper-level article just for the sake of presenting on a conference for people who do not know anything about the issue and just can do nothing to change the situation.

4 Michael Hancock 3/5/2009 at 10:49 am

@ Oldschool Boy:

You make some very large assumptions about my target audience, most of which are wrong. Apparently I should write for the mythical person that: A)grew up in the region, B)has a degree in hydrology or environmental science, and C) knows about the problem because it has been in newspapers and magazines and school courses.

Since I wrote in English, my main target audience is decidedly NOT people that grew up in the region, but academics in the US, who are NOT familiar with the region, and who have NOT heard about the problem in any newspapers you’ll find here, let alone school courses. The standard you’re holding me to is ridiculous.

I understand that you hold academia to be worthless and below respect, and that’s fine. However, I think that getting a Masters Degree will help me understand more about the region. You might think that it’s a pathetic waste of time to go to a conference and present a paper to ‘people that can’t do anything,’ but I don’t know what you would prefer. Where do people actually ‘do something?’ In Kazakhstan? At USAID or Soros?

This was not a paper written for this blog, but a paper I wrote that might be of interest to readers of this blog.

The main issue is that we need to raise awareness about Balkhash outside of Kazakhstan since, as my paper states, it is not “up to Kazakhstan” to decide whether or not Balkhash remains, but rather a decision for China. And China should not care if a ‘minor lake’ disappears. However, more foreign attention on the matter might add the pressure necessary to realize how important Balkhash is to Kazakhstan.

And I think my paper makes an important point that most articles on Balkhash miss – that Kazakhstan is almost powerless in this situation, considering how much water in the region is flowing downstream from China, who is hoping to utilize more of that water for itself. A similar problem lies in wait in Afghanistan, should it rise out of civil/social instability, and start taking more than a pittance out of the Amu Darya, as is its right.

In short, I prefer constructive criticism to comments along the lines of “your paper is a waste of my time.” Your patronizing attempts to ‘help’ are thinly veiled efforts to let me know that I’m a complete failure for attempting to move through Academia. I’d rather you didn’t make comments on my writing, thank you, if that’s all you’re going to say.

5 denis 3/5/2009 at 12:24 pm

Michael, I have enjoyed reading your article. It is informative and thought-provoking, especially, the China part. Thank you.

With regards to Oldschoolboy’s criticism, I should think it would be clear to anyone that any expert does not possess a full knowledge of the subject. Therefore, all benefit when they share their knowledge, however little it might be.

I also think that it is strange in this day and age to question the value of education or feel the need to defend one’s choice to better educate oneself.

Michael, look forward to your next articles. By the way, what does it mean to latinize an alphabet? Did they add latin letters to the cyrillic alphabet they were using?

6 Oldschool Boy 3/5/2009 at 6:44 pm

Michael,

I did not criticize your paper, I just pointed out for you criteria against which you should assess worthiness of your work.
If you disagree with me that the points I mentioned are feasible, then say so. Do not take defensive position.
By the way, people who you have referred to as “mythical” in fact exist. You do not seriously think that someone who grew up in the region can not get a degree in hydrology or environmental science and does not read newspapers and can not understand English.
By saying that academics in US do NOT know about one of the biggest environmental problems in Central Asia – you yourself “hold US academia to be worthless and below respect”, you reinforce this approach even further by presenting them with a paper that lacks statistics, figures and authentic research. The standard I proposed to you is indeed very high, but that is the standard of true scientist. and you said “I think that getting a Masters Degree will help me understand more about the region.” — i strongly disagree with this idea. you should be awarded a Master’s degree based on your already acquired profound understanding about the region. with the level of knowledge and facts presented in your paper one might think you are pursuing a degree in journalism.
“You might think that it’s a pathetic waste of time to go to a conference and present a paper to ‘people that can’t do anything” —> this is exactly what I think.
By the way, do you know what Chinese comrades think about the issue? Do you think they do not care at all? in 2001 , September Kazakhstan – China and Kazakhstan signed a bilateral agreement on cooperation in environmental issues concerning Ili- Balkhash area. Every year concerned international scholars gather for a Forum “Balkhash” – organized annually since 2004.
Basically, contents of your paper is commonly known facts for ecologists, it may be good for popular magazine (since it lacks numbers and facts) if you add some more pictures and “interesting facts”. It may be good for raising “awareness”.
The thing with the Internet is that you do not know who your audience can be.

7 Michael Hancock 3/5/2009 at 7:00 pm

I think, Oldschool Boy, that what we have here is a failure to communicate. Just because I haven’t done my own ecological research in the region, I’m not able to analyze the various data? I could quote all the numbers that I found, but I’d rather interpret them for you, rather than placing them out of context in the middle of a paper. I think you are not familiar with academic standards in the United States.

The Balkhash Forum you refer to was a part of my research, and from what I have seen, it is an ineffectual joke. If we leave the preservation of Balkhash up to such forums and the government, then you can kiss the lake goodbye already.

Again, at this point, I would prefer that you not comment on my articles anymore. They are not welcome if you are going to be so disrespectful without adding anything. You are coming close to being a blog “troll,” in my opinion.

8 Oldschool Boy 3/5/2009 at 7:35 pm

Michael,
FYI, I have a graduate degree from a US university and in fact, am familiar with US academic standards. On the contrary, i think you are not familiar, with any scientific standards : if you think you can solve a problem without collecting data and supporting your paper with solid analysis.
If you can not withstand any criticism, I will no longer comment on any of your articles. But that just makes you less of a researcher and, which is worse, less of a man. Good Luck in Central Asian Studies.

9 Antoine 3/6/2009 at 1:04 am

The tone of Oldschool Boy’s remarks seem to be generally in line with most of the kind of attitude he has expressed on this blog, and unfortunately all too common among overly defensive and sensitive Central Asians with experience of study abroad. He is contemptuous of lay Western interest in the region and automatically assumes his own knowledge and opinions on almost everything affecting Central Asia to be superior than anything that any foreigner might have to offer. In that respect, he is patently incorrect and it is an almost pitiful sight to see how misguided the attitude is.
Taking that stance is his prerogative, however, and it is wrong to ask him to stop commenting on the blog. After all, you cannot expect to climb the greasy pole of academia without expecting a copious amount of this kind of snide verbiage to be hoisted in your general direction. Also, while he has been quite patently rude in his approach and malicious in his intent, the language has been tempered and by no means directly abusive.
On a general point, meanwhile, it would be nice to think that the comments section could have a contributory nature; adding to the general understanding of a given subject, rather than being a forum for simply showing off one’s own knowledge and indulging in petty sniping.
I have lived and worked in the region for some time now and yet disgracefully knew very little about the topic of this post. So let me thank you for putting it up and good luck with future endeavors.

10 michaelhancock 3/6/2009 at 8:31 am

Antoine, you’re right of course. And Kristine, your presentation was most excellent, and definitely would be great to share with Registan – you could definitely get Nathan to post it, or have you post it yourself with a new account.

I can’t [and wouldn't] physically stop OldSchool Boy from commenting, but I can ask him to refrain in the same air as “if you can’t say something nice, don’t say anything at all.” In any event, he still had the last word, impugning my manhood, which is comical and a fine climax to the nature of his comments.

I guess my skin isn’t as thick as it used to be. I think it stems more from the fact that this wasn’t just a blog post, but a paper that saw many, many drafts, and something I really labored over. Also, using the word “journalist” as an insult is kind of nasty, especially since I respect journalism and think it also has a lot to offer in the area. In any event, I hope to keep posting now that midterms are coming to an end and I can hopefully find a spare moment.

11 Brent 3/7/2009 at 11:11 pm

As I read the debates about this post, it seems to center on the following question: why do we do academic work on Central Asia? It seems that there are two (incredibly) broad possible categories of answers:

1) We do work on Central Asia because we want a deeper understanding of the social, environmental, political, cultural realities of the region. We are interested here in the deep context, the so-called webs of meaning, that are easily overlooked or ignored. This work is usually decidedly un-positivistic; there are rarely distinct dependent, independent or control variables and we are uninterested in generalizeability. Work like this often, but not always, is done to advocate for something (e.g. to “spread awareness”). Applying the “journalism” label to work in this category should not be considered derogatory.

2) We do work on Central Asia to develop and test general theories. These theories should be able to be applied to other regions, so deep context is downplayed. This work is, by its nature, positivisitic; there are distinct dependent, independent, and control variables. This type of work should rarely, if ever, be used to advocate for anything directly (although indirect utilization is the dream of us all). Applying the “journalism” label
to work in this category should be considered derogatory.

It seems that Michael’s article fits squarely in category 1. While it is probably not the definitive piece on the topic, he never claims it to be as such. But it was very readable piece on an issue that is not widely discussed in English language sources. And posting it on this blog certainly helps the author to raise awareness, which was his stated attention. So it was a success.

Oldschool boy’s comments, however, suggest that he wishes the paper were in the second category. I am sympathetic to this wish (if not the tone of the postings); but that is due to my bias as a social scientist. I, personally, would be insulted if someone called my work “a fine piece of journalism.” But this has more to do with my intentions than in the inherent qualities of journalism. Afterall, even the most hardcore positivist Econometrician will rely on journalistic reports to produce her dataset.

So Michael, keep posting your work. It is valuable and interesting…even if it doesn’t have a decision tree or equations.

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